Wednesday, July 3, 2019

Persuasive writing logun

In my opinion I disagree with opening the Great Walk because it will hurt the Environment.
The rubbish will come from the people who come on the track which will damage the environment.


Secondly. there will be more tourists and more Freedom campers which will make the town's busier and
noisier. Also there will be less car parks and huts being booked which will make it harder for the locals to
use them. 


Thirdly. There will be accidents. More traffic could cours crashes. people could fall off the track by not
following the rules and people could get lost by going off the track 

 In conclusion I think the Great Walk is a bad idea because it will hurt the environment. There will be
more tourists and the possibility there could be more accidents.

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