This week room 5 made storyboards about. Are weekends my one is about me and my family. Swimming in a pool and the dinosaurs are. Toys and the other ones in the water are flotes the true part is the first one.
Hi Logun My name is Zara from Paparoa Range School. I like the way you put more than one different animal in your story.Next time you could add a bit more of a description of what Room 5 did and how did they get to that stage of writing it.
Hi Logan its Peter here. I like the fact you went swimming in the holidays. I like the dinosaurs. What is the fictional prat and what is the true part😀😎😈.
Hi Logun My name is Zara from Paparoa Range School. I like the way you put more than one different animal in your story.Next time you could add a bit more of a description of what Room 5 did and how did they get to that stage of writing it.
ReplyDeleteHi Logan its Peter here. I like the fact you went swimming in the holidays. I like the dinosaurs. What is the fictional prat and what is the true part😀😎😈.
ReplyDeletehi peter and zara thanks for nice comments 😃😃
ReplyDeleteHi logun my name is harry at paparoa range school,
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you explained what the things were in the story. maybe next time you can work on your spelling. Ruby's was rather similar though.
hi harry thanks fo the nice comments.:)
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