Wednesday, August 14, 2019

Show not tell

Hi my name is logun in my class we did a show not tell over the past few weeks
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 15, 2019 at 9:52 AM

    Hi logun my name is Harry at paparoa range school,

    I really like tell your choice of background the green really stands out because of the black. Your descriptive writing is also really outstanding.

    maybe next time you can separate the show from the tall.

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  2. Miss B (Principal)September 4, 2019 at 9:08 PM

    Hello Logun,
    Thank you very much for sharing your learning. It is great to see that you are making an effort with your writing. Cheers

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